[V1]
And here we are again
Sitting in this hole again
Dug this just for you and me
Made sure the walls wouldn't cave in
[chorus]
Now you're crawling and crying
Looking for a bottle
And I know it's crazy, I know it's crazy
But we do it anyways
[V2]
I do it just to see you smile
After two hours of drinking
And bottles scattered around us
I do it just to get that drunk
[chorus]
Now you're crawling and crying
Looking for a bottle
And I know it's crazy, I know it's crazy
But we do it anyways
[V3]
All day long the phone rings
Answering is just so out of style
Machine instead, listens to the voice
Worried and tear filled-
Nothing stops the voices...
And I know it's crazy
I know it's crazy
But we do it anyways
We do it just to get that drunk
We do it just because
We do it just for us
Author notes
Band: Smile Empty Soul
Song: Bottom of a Bottle
Link: Click Here for Lyrics
Notes: Okay, so it's not really like the song- but the song did inspire me!
Oh and also- sorry it's a little longer than 20 lines... hope you enjoyed it anyways!
A contest entry
- Song/Lyrics inspiration by whatever girl.
300 points, ended July 30, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My first 'lyrics' how'd i do?
Comments
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I Like it!
I think it would make a great song. Eventhough im not a big fan of smile empty soul. But i think it would make a good song it has alot of emotion. Well good luck in the contest! -
ah cool!
but i think it could lose the V1 etc
cuz to me it kind of throws the poem off a little bit. but other than that it's all good
good luck
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