Melting under false
illusions of freedom,
drip the tears of Harlequins;
innocents clinging to
misplaced individuality.
©2007
Author notes
Written for the contest: Quickie! 10 Entries! 5 lines! Picture inspired. [In honour of me finally beating the amount of contests held by Gaylene] by DwellingInDarkness
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3207668
Won Gold
A contest entry
- Quickie! 10 Entries! 5 lines! Picture inspired. [In honour of me finally beating the amount of contests held by Gaylene] by Naridill.
300 points, ended July 19, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A critical comment is invited.
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i meant the words..
i love your work&words..
so please dont get me wrong. -
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Okay. Thank you.
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there is a point for everything
you just have to GAZE clearly.. -
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Well, if you are posting to the picture, you need to add it to your page, not mine. This is my take on the photo; I am sure you have yours.
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Blurred with pain
clean yet stained
yearn to shout
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Is there a point to this?
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I like this, simple yet full of imagery and creative words played around. Nicely penned..
Thanks for entering, much luck. -
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Thank you for the contest. And, the placing and points are both greatly appreciated. Looking forward to the next one.
rous
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