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reasoned grace

 

I dwell in deeper well of life

as seasons pass in reasoned grace,

and face is glimmered image clearer

in blade of grass and heartbeats mirror

woven through sparked spirits web

of presence tendered every breath,

in stone of ancient tree remembered

and language of half forgotten jest,

where all is linked in sacred circle

only Mystery greater than the rest.

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  • Blissful Melody
    July 18, 2007

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    Such depth and beauty! You have created for us beautiful metaphors.. The rhyming seems a bit odd but it works quite well in the end. I love everything about this piece!
    Best of luck and thanks for entering!

  • Blissful Melody
    July 18, 2007
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    Prompt: define divine. Tell me what it means to be divine.