Mysterious shadow from my wall
A portrait of divinity to me
Across my unkempt bed you seem to crawl
As 'holy' as anything else I see
A beautiful dark semicircle cast
By nothing human eyes can comprehend
A perfection I feel is unsurpassed
Causing once 'normal' beliefs to suspend
Placing all of true faith within your grace
While you yet exist you are my embrace
Author notes
PROMPT:
DEFINE DIVINE! Tell me what it means to you for something to be divine. I want a deep explanation though, don't just tell me that your chosen God (or Goddess) is divine, tell me WHY he/she is divine.
A contest entry
- Spiritual Quickie, PIF, 10x10x60 by Blissful Melody.
420 points, ended July 20, 2007, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is one you have read to me. A beautifully penned embrace of the darkness. Sometimes it can be a nice companion.
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this is amazing
i became alittle light-headed while reading, but this is amazing, wow
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Excellent Piece Baby
Congrats on the silver
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This is great, the words show the Mystery behind true Faith.
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I love this it is an awesome write. great job Mark.
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wow mark this was amazing and beautifal. i loved every bit of it. it was strong and powerful, the images were vivid and the wording and rhyming was excellent. well done and congrats on the honary
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This is very beautiful!
Magical, mysterious and maginficent!
Excellent wording and rhyme. Seems like a shorter form of a sonnet (lol)
Keep on writing,
Nooni
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Thankies
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Whoa! This is such an interesting piece! I love it! Great take on both the prompt and the shadow! Thanks for entering and best of luck!
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I can't bunny you again but this is brillant, what an awesome view from that shadow. Made me wanna be religious to worship it.
All hail
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Prompt: define divine. Tell me what it means to be divine.
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wierd
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GOODLUCK HUNNY BUNS ¶¶¶
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