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Deeper than a tangled eye

 

Tangerine hair stirs mix of motion,

as mirror masks such deeper sky.

In dark of eye and simmered reason,

called as treason left to lie

on tangled sheets of black and white.

 

 

 

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  • Naridill
    July 19, 2007

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    Very beautiful and interesting, I like the concept you contrasted.

    Thanks for entering, much luck.

  • Desire gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    Oy!

    Love the words simmered reason
    and the mirror masks such deeper sky

    Gosh~
    Many of my favorites entered this contest
    Thank You for the Journey in tangled sheets
    of black and white
    Love this!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~