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Urban Ugliness - Pretty Pass

Tourists look out from the balconies onboard the cruise ship Crown Princess in Belfast, Northern Ireland
Walls, eyesore scabs, once whitewashed, bright, now drab,
concretely stand, discarded, sharded,  glass
peppered with papered over panes, rehab,
pained, anguished shivers pass...

Once there, some say, experimental lab
tested theories ‘fresh’ for some sad mass
condo construction programs billed to last …
Shifty shadows harrow, narrow, grab
delinquency’s sad h[a]unting ground alas!
overstretched societal elastoplast.

Littered leavings, slivered shards, hard stab,
in shabby neighborhood no light, less class,
grey grieving rearing torn from earth by blast.
 

Naught now recalls trout tippling spring, where dab
once played, glade lending shade. Today sea bass
sweat toxic taxidermic tears in bargain basement crass.

Uniform urban ugliness, slab on slab,
stressed concrete pressed to duty jests green grass, ~
pity our pretty pass...

 

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  • this was a very deep and well expresed poem here i wa really blown away with the way you reached down in your writing soul and delivered ths great job

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  • slab on slab.....yes yes, this absolutely speaks to a moratorium... what can we do...... what have we done....


  • SpydurPoet silver member
    July 28, 2007
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    Oh shite! Damn that was amazing! You have one of the greatest talents I have ever seen on this site!! Wow. You force words to submit to your thoughts and slam them on paper (or screen) with such strong intentions. This was so (damnitIhatetousethisword) cool.
    Write on!!!
    ~*~SP~*~

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