Im starting over
[Wont be easy]
No more cutting
[You'll never stop]
No more crying all night because you didnt get his call
[He must be using you]
No more regrets of the things I've done which I know were mistakes
[Everything you've done was a mistake]
No more calling myself ugly fat and worthless
[No matter what people say you know you are]
No more basing poems on men
[Then why did you write the last two?]
Most of this thats written I did last night
[Because yuo"re too weak to fight]
All these brackets
[Is me taking over]
Because me starting over
[Will never happen]
A contest entry
- How do you really feel? by Mainzy.
1500 points, ended August 18, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Back to Where I was...... by the tempest.
475 points, ended July 27, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
any good?
Comments
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when two are living in one space,
when one wants pain
and one wants grace
the fight’s not fair
the truths aren’t true
there is little else that you can do
but hang on to your little bit
of your own life
and try to make it fit
into the plan of a higher being
whose plan you have
no way of seeing
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Very twisted and deep! Thanks for the entry in the contest and goodluck
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jessie...
i LOVE how this is set out....
i....it's..........wow...
your inner most thoughts,
pressuring you to let it all out, but you won't. and you know you won't.
i know it hurts,
and i'm always gonna be here for you...
i love you baby gurl ♥
mucho amore and prayer,
~*Jess*~
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