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solace in solitude

enclosed
familiar
yet so
distant
though
not so
much as
to fall
out of
grace
from
all
we
thought
we
knew
so
well

A contest entry

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  • Tyla-Tragedy
    July 24, 2007

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    i really enjoy this piece.
    I almost dont understand.
    But it's great to read.
    PLenty.
    <1234


  • -BlackKnight- gold member
    July 19, 2007

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    Oh man...I like using short lines and all, but this overdid it. A lot. Not to mention the words themselves made very little sense. Bleh.


    • hypnorocker
      July 24, 2007
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      sorry

      hm... well i thought they did..... i guess not for other people so much.... oh well thanks for the feedback


  • Papyrus
    July 18, 2007

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    wow. top-three finish for sure. what is your explination?

    I like the brief style, might use it.



    -Pap.

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