When I'm all alone,
I think of you.
I just can't block the visions,
of what used to be,
and how we used to talk.
I miss you more than humanly possible.
I don't go through a day where I don't remember,
where I don't want to cry at the thought of you.
I would happily give my life to save yours,
to bring you back healthy,
and safe from danger.
I would go back in time and find what caused your cancer,
and to have it diagnosed earlier.
So hopefully you would live.
I wish I could see you smile again,
and we could chat just one more time.
I would be happy with anything,
if it involved seeing you,
just one more time.
A contest entry
- Contests for kids under 14:Write about some one you care for by pop123.
525 points, ended July 8, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - In memory of those you miss :) by LeilaJayne.
300 points, ended August 4, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A poem about my Mamaw... she was a great woman and grandmother.
Comments
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This poem is just wonderful.I am so happy you entered it in my contest.I used to have a grandma who died in front of me,but I never got to know her,she was so sick.Good luck!
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This is sad...feel tears coming up...I don't even have words to say how sorry I am you lost someone you love so dearly...
Please take care and save the lovely memories....
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