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Ant Hill

A
city
constructed
by workers who
zip with thoughtless
whiz and whir forgetting
impending rain

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Prompt: City

In a list

A contest entry

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  • jackie08
    July 18, 2007
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    short and good. you used few words and still got the point across.. me like


  • countrybabe gold member
    July 18, 2007
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    Well Done


  • MissPennyLane
    July 18, 2007
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    This was incrdible! You have such a unique take on the prompt; I wouldn't have thought of it-but I really love it! I also love the way your formed the words-really added to the effect of the piece! Great job, and thanks so much for your entry!
    Amanda