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mechanically chained

chained in a
mechanical sense-

not prohibiting
warmth of another's
  attempted clutch-

the rusted metal
still eaten by
murky waters

Author notes

this was my first reaction upon seeing the picture (which was a really great inspiration, by the way)

A contest entry

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  • Griswold silver member
    July 18, 2007
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    Good job to grab the silver.


  • Naridill
    July 18, 2007

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    Bloody brillant! Proof that first instinct is best. Loved this, captured the essence and more within it.
    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.

  • Griswold silver member
    July 18, 2007
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    Good one


  • CherylAnn
    July 18, 2007
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    WOW this is amazing...
    Good Luck
    Blessings
    ~Cheryl~


  • countrybabe gold member
    July 18, 2007
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    Excellent Piece

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