Eamarti
Troubled images flood my mind
As calm and panic become entwined
Then through my blurry eyes I see
The tools I need to set me free
Beckoning me to write one line
To fill my head of thoughts benign
The words start flowing, a poem evolves
And just as quick my pain dissolves.
A contest entry
- Add a verse. for Tapestry of poets world record attempt by Janice M Pickett.
360 points, ended August 17, 2007, 144 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A very simple and yet profound write that so many of us can relate to. I liked the whole poem as a package, neat, to the point and so true to life.
Bazza
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Not just because you liked my A Leaf Falls! Yeah, I enjoyed this because it is is just so true and it resonates for writers of whatever persuasion. Splendid, thanks so much for sharing this piece.
Donald -
you know, i too have found that poetry is a wonderful release during hard times but during good times, it also touches many hearts, i guess that goes both ways though
great contribution here be well and be blessed
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Glad you did well!
Mine was DQ'd
Tang
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Oh Excellent! thankyou
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