Looked backward
at a familiar reflection.
Youth had our faces raised.
Laughter kept us healthy,
and child-like drama
always made an appearance.
We must be inter-locked
in frozen memory
where flashbacks belch;
"come-hither"!
Frequent reminiscing occurs.
Wonder where our true portion
stands in time?
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- You, were wearing a green dress... by tara wilson.
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Comments
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wow
I enjoyed this. It took me to that reoccuring past that haunts with heavy feet and shouting desire.
Great write.
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I like this...looking back at a happy life together...thank you very much for this entry
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Ah Childhood
Adults can learn much from children including the ability to laugh. I loved that line for it serves as a good reminder to me. I'm often accused of taking life to seriously.
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