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Let me...

Let me hold you for a minute, so your touch will last forever.
Let me kiss you twice, so I can treasure it better.
Let us hold hands and gaze at each other.
Let me fall in love with you, so my heart will be put back together.

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  • forgotten dream
    July 21, 2007

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    i really liked how the repetition of the first word worked in this piece. it gives it a nice flow. a sweet write. i really liked the opening line - very lovely. thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest <3