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new beginning--

lets keep falling into each other,
promising to break our fall.
i've never really felt like this with another,
i'm really hoping your here for the long haul.
you have a way of making me not feel smothered.
i really love it when we brawl.
you got me wrapped around your finger.

you are some how breaking down my wall.

so babe,

lets keep falling into each other.
promising to break our fall.

 

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  • Another Sad Song
    July 19, 2007
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    i promise, i'll catch you =]

  • Detached
    July 18, 2007
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    romantic

    I like it! It's got great meaning behind it.

  • Underneathitall
    July 18, 2007

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    I'm happy for you and stuff =]
    lovely poem. Its really hopeful.
    so yeah,
    good luck and all that mess.
    sincerely.