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Shadowed shelves

Skeletal secrets
locked within,
shadowed boxes
on shadowed shelves.
Each one decrepit
long forgotten,
dusty dreams,
webbed musings,
better left
on shadowed shelves.

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  • EncounteredEpiphany
    July 18, 2007

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    Bravo!

    Brilliant treasure chest write. I love the metaphore within, very short but powerful manuscript.

    Lo-Amo Salute!!!