my world
became natural disasters;
I dropped meteors
on myself.
A contest entry
- 10/10/10-Pretty dark by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended July 18, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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this blew me away. F.ing l o v e this. simplistic space refrence takes you deep.
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Congratulations on your Golden award, well deserved, excellent take off the prompt
Have a wonderful day, Ken IBT
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this is truly and interesting and creative poem you have done here, i like it and in a way i get it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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It would seem the worlds natural disasters have picked up in the last 20yrs, I like the perspective you have taken..good take off the prompt..good luck in the contest, Ken IBT
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Oh, this is quite remarkable. I love this so much. It seems like some emo, pain self-inflicting, emotional crisis, but it's unique and original and beautiful. Yet, it also seems as if you're playing God to yourself, wanting to control life. Or maybe I'm wrong either way, but either way it's incredibly gorgeous and so breathy, full of greatness. Nice job and good luck.
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Sounds painful,good take on the prompt.
great penning...
Best of Luck
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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