sometimes it seems there's nothin' else worth living for
sometimes it seems there's no point stayin' strong
sometimes it seems like givin' up would make it so much easier
sometimes it seems no matter what i do i end up cryin' 'fore too long
sometimes it seems there's nothin' left worth fighting for
sometimes it seems like everything is wrong
sometimes it seems like hangin' on is barely worth the trouble
sometimes it seems like i would rather die than have to face this world alone.
tell me why
in the end i always end up alone
tell me why
i end up cryin' in a corner and there's no one i can talk to anymore.
let me tell you
this life is not worth livin' for at all
tell me why
i always date the guys who never call.
[yeah, that was for you]
sometimes it seems like promises don't mean a thing
sometimes it seems there's no way i'll get through
sometimes it seems no matter how i work to make it through the day
when night comes i'll be curled up in a corner and i'm crying over you
sometimes it seems there's nothing else to hope for
it seems betrayal is my only friend
sometimes it seems i can't control myself, can't help this solitude
sometimes it seems i'll end by myself, and i would rather end up dead.
tell me why
in the end i always end up alone
tell my why
i end up cryin' in a corner and there's no one left to live for anymore.
let me tell you
love is not worth livin' for at all
tell me why
i wait and wait but know you'll never call.
tell me why
in the end i always end up by myself
tell me why
i have to fall in love with someone else
tell me why
i'm so in love but yet i'm so alone
tell me why
why is it so hard for you to pick up the goddamn phone,
dial my goddamn number,
wait for the goddamn ring
a five-minute fucking phone call
is that too much to ask?
tell me why it's so difficult
tell me why it's so difficult
tell me why
why i'm so addicted to your voice
tell me why
why i'm so obsessed with you, and i don't even have a goddamn choice.
let me tell you
it's so hard not to scream, hard not to die
tell me why
i can't stop thinking of you
tell me why...
Author notes
[[username: a saint in purgatory]]
A contest entry
- options by everthesame.
850 points, ended July 18, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
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this was sooo deep and amazing! wonderful wirte!
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I LOVE THIS!!!!
OMG THIS IS HOW I FEEL ABOUT THAT "FAMOUS" GUY in everyone's dreams!!
Way with words!!!!
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oh wow this stole my breath away i almost started crying it was a very depressing read i love it it flowed so well and left me with nothing l;eft to say great job..now please add in your ap sn in your author notes and you will be set thank you for your entry
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Vicious
This was absulutely venomous. Whoever this is directed at could probably feel the hate while you wrote it! For such a vicious song it's very depressing. The sorrows leaks through and covers everything. I loved it from beginning to end. I thought the repitition fit the song perfectly and would love to hear put to music. i'd love to be the one who got to put it to music but that's a whole other subject!
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hmmm... i would love to have some of my stuff put to music. i'm good at lyrics but i can't compose at all. what i write seems to be influenced by what i'm listening to at the time, i just realized. i was listening to shinedown when i wrote this.
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