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Originally Typical

Me is typical
of poets
procrastinator of
time, no end-line-rhyme
yes, I take the

"time to procrastinate"

I hate them words of
criticism, for so
it is of Me
Creativity! I say
Nay! not waste

of day, of self

make Haste! before
Me falls asleep, it is
hard work to conjure
thoughts up all
My own so I

"seek inspiration"

from others' I have read
original, unique
and takes them home
My own becomes
so typical

of poets.

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*by Papyrus

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  • Decorus Somnium
    June 10, 2008
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    Hahaha this is sweet! I really liked it. It really is original.
    Keep writing


  • Dmj
    August 7, 2007

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    Real

    Talk right there it is hard to not realize that u r takin others as part of urself its just how u use it that is the difference

  • mama-drama
    August 2, 2007
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    Beautiful
    I think that is so true!

  • Cat gold member
    August 1, 2007
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    self serve poetry- thanks for entering

    m


  • CarCrashHumor
    July 31, 2007

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    I've read this so many times and it speaks so much truth.

    one thing: "takes" --> "take" [?? maybe, I'm not sure.]

    truly love it.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    July 28, 2007

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    you seemt to be standing on your own soap box which is fine with me

    I don't mind internalised rhyme when its done well and not overdone... sorry..

    but this seems a little bit terse ? .. anyways thanks for entering...

    G.x


  • ventus11
    July 25, 2007

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    hey what every floats your boat. great write i hope that you do well in your contest. excellent poem.


  • Saree Wynter
    July 24, 2007

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    This is great love the rhyme, the topic, and the flow.
    I like the way you used me. When I read this to myself I think it sounds great aloud. Good luck in you cotest GREAT WRITE!!! Thanks for sharing.

  • unraveled
    July 23, 2007

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    haha, nice. i like the line "i say Nay! not waste of day, of self" and yes, this actually does describe a few poets on here. a very good job and good luck in your contests!

    cassidy


  • KatandLRpoetry
    July 20, 2007

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    haha i think i can relate to this one, i really like how u worded it aswell, it gave it a little twist that just made it that more enjoyable=) great job


  • cherche -d -ame
    July 19, 2007

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    quite cute. I liked the wording and the actual truth that was behind it.....so many things inspire us that I wonder if there really ever is such a thing as "exclusive creativity"
    Take care,
    reenie


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    Well done, like the style of this, the talking of your self, your muse and creativity....Keep penning....

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