today
i decided to live
not because
i want to
in fact
i still want
the opposite
but because
you need me
and now
that the choice
has been made
i feel
even worse
knowing that
it won't all
be over soon
i'm trying
not to hate you
for saving
my miserable life
even if it was
only an accident
Any title suggestions?
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Profound
This is a very honest piece of writing, the emotion comes across very strongly. Life, need to be embraced though, i spent so much of my life living it for others, that I lost myself, living for some else is no reason to live. Although I gather it might be a very special little person, always remember that nothing in life happens is an accident, it all has a purpose. Enough preaching, well done good write, hope to read more of your work in the future.
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A very deep and sad write. Tragic that the only reason you want to live is because you are needed. There is so much worth living for and I'm sure that as time goes by you will be okay. I'm that you shared this. Well done. Lovely writing, please keep it up.
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Well this is quite a deep and sad poem that you have written here... though I'm very glad to hear that you've descided to keep on living...
No matter how bad things might look, sooner or later everything will get better for you and you will realize that it was all worth it...
It's of no use to long for death to come, life can be so beautiful and it's so short...
Keep up the positive thinking and you will get there
Leander -
Have you considered, "Choices," as a title for your poem...as I see you're searching for a title....?
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I can sympathize with your feelings and am sorry you, too, feel this way. I am learning to find ways to cope with life and living. I hope that you will, too. Brilliant work on the poem! Take care and message me if you ever need to chat.
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