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Song of Styx

Across the river Styx, once you’ve died,
To walk with the shades on the other side.
Faces of the murdered, shadows of the dead,
Will steal you away while you sleep in bed.

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Yeah, it's short. And sucky. Wrote this when I was about 9, so I guess for that age it's at least passable. RIGHT...?

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  • myrataal silver member
    August 30, 2008

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    Dreamwalking ...

    is the thing I did best, when I was nine years old ... I was the moving dot of light in a very dark night; the only life in a chamber filled with dead.



    Be well and write your soul, as you do.

    Myra