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Earth



Among flora and fauna flair
I breathe sounds of wilderness
creatures great and small
roam the metronome

mesmerized-
                          I marvel earth.



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  • Namita
    July 18, 2007

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    Wow! Such a beautiful poem from your pen. Great job, friend!!

    Luv,
    Candy


  • Cat gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    very very nice.. this is going to be hard to judge with all the really good entries here.. in 10 minutes

    i love your final line.. nice, nice

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