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secret summer

 

clothed in rampant rags of reason

I wander shy in subtle seas,

in dreamers dress of flowing feathers

cloaked in sparks of dust, deceived

 

where voices lend to conscience rendered

subtle shells of make believe

and fragile fingers tender treasure,

tremors rope imaginations cheek

 

when there you rise as dancing figure

twirling mind as hair in spin,

softer than old stone remembers

secret summer of hearts in beat

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  • Cat gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    and here is the catch.. if i post a rule "no end line rhyme" than i have to follow it although- i just realized that you my friend can end line rhyme probably better than anyone else on this site- i didnt want to tear my eyes out in fact i enjoyed the ride..

    oy.