With the glory of the rising sun
With in the earth's wide span
Near the glimmering greens
Among the watery silence
of nature's dripping peace
Life finds a way towards eternal grace.
Singing birds spread melody in the air
The murmuring of the leaves sound like the song of loneliness
With all the colors of the rainbow a rainy day adores evening's face
Life gets complete meaning touching the golden haze.
Please tell me what you think
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this was passible more nature and earth to the writing would have made it a suberb nature place good luck to the next rounf of america next top poet
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This is a very good poem about nature.My most favourite line is the following:
"The murmuring of the leaves sound like the song of loneliness"
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5/10
It was nice, but didn't capture me at all. By the time I got to line 3, I couldn't remember the gist of line 1. -
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I love the wording and the beautiful detailing. This creates a great image. I gvie this a 9/10
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This is good.
7/10
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peaceful write
you bring so much peacefulness to life with this write. it's as if the words are floating like butterflies through my mind.. this is a great write..thanks for allowing me to read and comment on this beautiful poem...
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