Love is enchanted
A small secret it should be
A journey it is.
A contest entry
- 20 lines or less by forgotten dream.
425 points, ended July 21, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
A love haiku.
Comments
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really powerful for just three short lines, and a sweet haiku. i agree fully that love is a journey, and there is nothing quite like it. i'm not sure though why exactly you think love should be kept a secret? overall a strong haiku. keep up the great work, thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest <3
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Very beautiful. Short yet powerful. Keep it up!!
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aww i really love this one
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yes it is and once the love is broken it is hard to gain back this is beautiful
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