Awake; and alone without
consolance;
in my mind a telephone rings
your voice reminds
of the dances;
sultry, with meaning
though no longer
living.
to kiss was to complete;
I listen; but hear
the operator informing;
call has been disconnected
Author notes
I realized after I wrote this; that I'm not sure how well it fits the prompt : /, but I beileve it's a bit too late for me to change it. It's what the prompt inspired; a love lost-that was now hurting-but once was full of temptations
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Contest by countrybabe.
630 points, ended July 17, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Different But I Like
This is very different to what i expected fromt he prompt but I do like it. Well done on being original. Thank you for entering.
Keep writing
Countrybabe
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Your prompt is:
‘You’re killing me baby
with the touch of your lips
and the way you make me want you
with the sway of your hips.’
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