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Grace wings
Reflecting love
Of freedom, the painting
Nature symbolic of legends
~ Beauty’s twirl ~
Legends of symbolic nature
Painting the freedom of
Love reflecting
Wing’s grace
[~]
Author notes
To learn how to write a butterfly cinquin, please check-out the contest below. I also made it work as a palindrome, thats not needed. Hope you like.
A contest entry
- Butterfly Cinquains by azure85.
600 points, ended July 18, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Shoot.
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Hoodwinked
You have been hoodwinked by the Poetic Bandits. I absolutley adore this piece expecially because the title is really cool. Well the piece is all together really amazing and I love it. Great write and keep it up.
Never give up
Kate
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Scored
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THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! thanks for impressing me as i have my fingers crossed for you and 2 more on here i hope the other writes impress me as well good luck a 10 all the way
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9/10
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Wow, this is really cool! A palindrome too! A lovely butterfly cinquain, that flutters so well reading it either way. Nicely done, thank you for your entry.
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~ Beauty’s twirl ~
Legends of symbolic nature
this is the part i think is just wonderful, i like the whole poem but i like this part a bit more, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest -
This is beautiful, graceful and complicated. You are expanding your poetic repertoire with wonderful results. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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Thank-you Liz
I am trying to work on some different kinda styles forms lately. I was actually happy with the way this turned out.
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