Ripped out, lying there
Bleeding, Aching
Pain from the knife, that was just stuck in
Love is suppose to be “amazing”
Screaming Out!
No one hears
Even if they do what good is it?
The knife won’t go away
It’s stabbing me over and over
It won’t stop
People tell me I’m stupid
It’s my fault
But tell me how to stop loving him
And I’ll gladly do it
Do they think I enjoy it?
I just get it bandaged up
Then he rips off the bandages
Old pain erupts
But now it’s not only old pain
New cuts he has made
Help me!
It cry’s out
Helpless and hurting
It lies there
Please make the pain stop!
Someone please…
Help…
Author notes
Option 2
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Beautiful. amazing imagery, very vivid emotions.
Good job and good luck -
i understand this one very much so take care of your wounds dont waste life away like i have
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Wow, that was heart braking. i hope you're doing okay now. Keep your chin up!
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Oh my this is full of imagery and emotion of such pain
I hope one day you can make the decision that you are more worthy than the treatment you are getting.
All the best in the contest and welcome to AP
If you need any help here at AP please don't hesitate to contact myself or any other online Greeter. We are always willing to help
Gaylene
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