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Cry Not For Me

No tears shed
till I've walked
in your painful shadow.

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Prompt: A wretched soul, bruised with adversity,
We bid be quiet when we hear it cry;
But were we burdened with like weight of pain,
As much or more we should ourselves complain.
William Shakespeare


I have to make 10 words out of like 30, eek!

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  • blondone silver member
    July 17, 2007
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    really good deep and in just ten words


  • countrybabe gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Nicely Done

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    Prompt:A wretched soul, bruised with adversity,
    We bid be quiet when we hear it cry;
    But were we burdened with like weight of pain,
    As much or more we should ourselves complain.
    William Shakespeare