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Becasue I'm Older

Every year
I realize
That it keeps going
Faster and faster
And I'm getting a bit
Older, quicker
Then I would like

Keeping up with all
Those trends,
Just so i can trash 'em
Is beinging to seem
Like a juvinial
Waste of time
That I go by

Time is flying
It has Flown
I'm one year older
As of yesterday
It's all passing by
I have to say fare well
To everything I'm leaving behind

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  • zac125
    August 25, 2007
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    I love it, though its very original, but has a unique taste to it i guess, keep on writin!


  • Namita
    July 18, 2007

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    Wow! Ths\is is a very mature poem for one so young. Great job. Keep it up! Wonderful word choice and exection. Stellar work, sweetie. Keep penning!!