For every ten people,
One is thinking of suicide,
One is about sex,
One is scared of getting hurt,
One is a fake,
One is a jock,
One is in love,
One is a cutter,
One who thinks their life is great,
One who is extremely loud,
And one who just sets, in quite,
Until they can't take anymore,
Now tell me which one are you?
Author notes
a little something i was thinking about [[mom or sister]]
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"In every ten people,
One is thinking of suicide,
One of sex,
One is scared of getting hurt,
One is a fake,
One is a jock,
One is in love,
One is a cutter,
One thinks their life is great,
One is extremely loud,
And one just sits, in quiet,
Until they can't take anymore,
Now tell me which one are you?" -
well i am not a fake or a jock and i pretty sure i am not in love, although maybe. i am only a cutter when i am in the kitchen (cutting vegetables). i think of suicide because i think of death and pain too much (though suicide well never happen to me). i am loud becuase i can, though i am quite about my dispostions untill i can't take it any more then someone gets hurt. i am afraid of getting hurt because it inhibits my chef skills and on the inside it creacks. i think about sex becuase i can be a nympho some times
i am seven in one
great thoughts one your part
~~Chef W.B.
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hell I fit half of those,lol awesome write.
moment liver -
sweet
very true
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Wow.
I read this and I'm speechless. You're right.
Well, I'm the one who's scared of getting hurt. :<
I like this a lot, it really makes you think.
good luck in my contest
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