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Evacuated Memories

Stranded in abstract memory,
  meditated thoughts drift slowly away.

Aching echoes swiftly evacuate,
  my life holds no place for you.

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Prompt: No Vacancy

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  • CitrineSunrise
    July 17, 2007
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    This is a very well written interpretation of this prompt. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz

  • CitrineSunrise
    July 17, 2007

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    Your prompt is: NO VACANCY. Please do not use this word in your poem or title. Good luck in this contest. Do not respond to my comments until after the contest is judged. Thank you.