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Feeding




They feed her

happiness

the way she feels

they feed her

anger

a new rage,

they feed on her

heart

and crippling

body,

these substances

she craves.

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  • Rhythm Child
    January 28
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    loved the sense of needing....
    great write thanks for the entry


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    January 26
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    Good poem for the effect of drugs. Succinct, well written.