The wind of change
came blowing in
Charming hearts
with its subtle dance
Adjusting paths
of hopeful souls
But they'd never know
Author notes
Just a random burst of words. I love to use beautiful words to describe what my thoughts are centered on, helps me to gain a new perspective or depth in my ponderings.
A contest entry
- Eloquence in Brevity by RatherImaginative.
1400 points, ended July 31, 2007, 29 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is beautiful, and so true . . . change happens so quickly and subtly, that often we are just left blinking our eyes, wondering how it slipped past us. I love the rhythm to the poem and how the poem ends at a crossroads, to be optimistic or pessimistic, depending on the reader. Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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I really like this. So much said in so few words
Great Job
Delila
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I like this...really lol
its so beautiful and i dont know why
its so short but gets to the soul no-less
I really like this!!
Good Luck & Keep Writing!!
♥--T.R;
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