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Eternal

Mind blazes from perfect sight
where nothing dulls the senses,
time never drains the spirit
and total consciousness is one's blood.

Spirit clothed in pure radiance,
aura shines from divine love,
every thought sings a thousand songs,
no tears ever flow again.

Timeless, is how one resides
amid a city's incredible splendor
of translucent walls in colors never before seen,
able to absorb each layer of ethereal reality
that has its own substance, but never ages.

It is a realm where creativity never ceases,
purged of shadows
only what is truly gold thrives.

Taking shapes and forms
more than this life could imagine,
without darkness, nor evil,
or the plots of mankind.

Peace clings to the essence,
free at last to dream
where our greatest longings
no longer remain
bed time fantasies.

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  • Jadon
    July 18, 2007

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    "more than this life could imagine"!

    You have travelled far and identified a comprehension we can only scarce begin to imagine. A perfected 'vision' and heightened awareness where we might achieve our intended potential.
    Banished is the element and role of time as we progress through an eternity where time no longer exists and we acheive an unimagined potential development.
    I found your last verse interesting that you would have the thoughts that sweep our minds as we seek rest here on Earth become realities in our eternal rest.
    A favourite line to contemplate is "every thought sings a thousand songs"
    Your vision is as vast as eternity and why should it not be. I appreciate your thoughts and the expression you have gathered to "Show Me Heaven". Jadon


  • StarEyes
    July 18, 2007

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    Ok, this is the second one I have read this morning, that it seemed like someone was looking into my heart and soul and putting it down on paper. This is amazing. You did a great job on this one! Best of luck to you in this contest!