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Phony Pony

I'm not a phony pony

I am going to scuba dive
I’m going to "sink" out in the bay

I hear there is a buried treasure
Filled with oats and hay

You see, I am quite an adventurer -
On a cruise, I even drank from a fountain

And after I retrieve, my bootie of hay
I'm going to trot straight up a mountain


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A contest entry

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  • catz Moderators member
    April 23, 2008

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    This is great, Sis. I thoroughly enjoyed this whimsical poem... and that horse... what a picture
    And congratulations on the Gold


    Dee


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    he he he what an amazing pony. may i still it. because he sounds like fun. i loved the poem it was funny and very clever,
    fits the picture well.
    well done and best of,luck


  • queen Moderators member
    July 17, 2007

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    My kind of pony Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest

  • Taylor Renee
    July 17, 2007

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    Haha
    This was so funny.
    I'm Taylor. I'm new HERE...I write on story write.
    This was a great poem lol. Good luck in the contest!!!

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