A person..no..a spirit says:
" How fares your own,
and how's your wing today,
still flaps alone ? "
And though the cryptic cry surrounds,
remorse is lost.
The vibes of pain string by no sound,
and heat is frost.
A person..no..a river streams:
" How fares your own ? "
and lifts my raft of sinking dreams;
" Still sail alone ? "
Light to the waning moon, current to sea,
yet no so real, but Rhondasail's to me.
Author notes
Many words are written, these are no different.
I just wish I have hit even tenth of the real you.
Thanks for the contest host for providing such an opportunity.
A contest entry
- a tribute to Rhondasail... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended July 22, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow
Cant believe i never saw this before, amazing, stunning, just leaves me speechless.. realy amazingg!!..
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Heheheheheheeee
*mister super talent evil darkness look*
Ohhh, nevermind, I used to stun people back in the day
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Hi, Rhondasail yes but also shades of Poe, very nice poem, It would be interesting to do this also in sonnet form, I shall be running a sonnet comp again and I personaly invite you, loved this poem, Di
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An honor
And I accept your invitation dear friend.
I'll be waiting for it, since it's been a very long while since I did any sonnet really.
Would be challenging.
Thanks for your lovely comment.
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Light to the waning moon, current to sea,
yet no so real, but Rhondasail's to me.
Truly a modest poem you have written my friend..I love it..thanks for this heartfelt entry in my contest...
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Thanks for your kindness
I merely tried to express it, and I am glad that I have done that even to a small degree.
Thank you again for the wonderful contest.
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What a caring and well crafted piece. I was sure it would be appreciated when read, but I see it already has been. Well done!
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And thank you
I feel appreciated because you are here too.
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RamiSon...speechless...Raven Dark...my Archer has truly hit the mark...*HUGS* *Kisses forehead*...Love, RhondaMom
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Thank you Rhonda
Have I ??
It's only true you know ??
Be well.
*Kisses your forhead*
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