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Care

I want to heal your pain
to soothe your hurts
to shield you from the world
and make you whole again.

But I know I can't
I'm caring
that is true
but it's not the kind of care you need.

I'm a patient person
so I can wait
I know that you are fragile
it's probably why I care.

I'm not as fragile
or as weak
as I may first appear
you do well to remember that.

I am not so sweet and kind
as to be oblivious
as to what has happened
I do know and I understand.

I want to help you.
Even if you do not want my help.

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Just a few thoughts I've had recently that's all.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    who are you trying to reach out to fayeness?
    because who ever you are trying to reach out to you should show them this.
    this was absolutly amazing i love how your ideas and thoughts were portrayed here
    and this was full of utmost care and emotion.
    a wonderful write keep it up


    • DarkStatic
      July 18, 2007
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      You already know that you royal pain.
      I dun wanna show it to him thank you very much...i get embarrassed easily.

      Thanks I always do my best!