You are politically correct
I may be tactfully challenged
I could be politically inept
or blunt as shit,
I mean sharply challenged?
I am delusionary challenged
I may be truthfully endowed
I could be deceitfully challenged
or not full of shit,
I mean excrementally disemboweled?
I think I'm honesty enabled
I may be discretely challenged
I could be fallibly fabled
or a loud mouth bitch,
I mean silently challenged?
Or maybe I'm just
a blunt as shit,
loud mouth bitch,
who's not full of shit,
so take your ten dollar words,
and be gone with it!
A contest entry
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550 points, ended August 2, 2007, 28 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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Wow this poem was kind of deep maybe your one thing and than again maybe your not good poem good luck in the contest
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ten bucks...
Well written and a very clever play on words poet! There's much to be said for being as blunt as shit... or as subtle as a sledge hammer sometimes!
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hahahahaha wow you speak the truth...love it!
This has alot of passion...feeling...and heart...
Clever and funny...but you still get the point
Thanks for entering
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Fantastic!
First and four-most, love the background. Where did you find it?
Second, apart from some perceived typos, [which jar my reading], I thought this flowed well on second reading [& 3rd, and 4th]. it "sounds" to me much like a rap poem.
I appreciate the feeling behind it, and will try to read more of your work soon.
Write On!
Jim
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The background I made from a pic I found on the net, I thought it was pretty cool too. I did try to make sure the spelling was correct and as far as I know it is, but that doesn't mean there isn't typos so I will check again. Oh and it was interesting that you picked up the rap flow, I do rap and therefore write a lot of but this wasn't intentionally that way but now you say it I notice it too. Thanks for your comment.
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I prefer to think of you as truthfully endowed! Thank you for a great laugh!!
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