(subsisting) together; slippery
and absurd, (prodigious)
amount unheard of; (sheathed)-
although they are laid together-
(unctuous) amongst themselves.
Author notes
if you need an explanation to go along with this; please do ask
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Thank you for your author's notes, but this clever piece speaks for itself. I know poetry is subjective, but I have never cared for the overuse of parenthesis. This poem, however, uses them to utmost effect. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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Great work. I like your take on the prompt. Really intriguing...really interesting...
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nice take on the prompt
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Your prompt is: DICTIONARY DIARRHEA. I am an English teacher, and I will give you the same note I give my students: Incomprehensibility does not equal depth. Good luck.
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