My friendly female companion whom I loved so much
I can still taste her lips, smell her hair, feel the touch
She sat and cried as she confessed her love
The shock she recieved when I confided the above
The kiss was so sweet that I almost drew back
I never thought I'd have her love to eventually lack
I felt her as she moved closer with a loving embrace
I remeber the heat inbetween her legs
Smiles grew as we decided it was time
I'd give evrything to hold this love that was once mine
She layed still as I licked her stomach so sweet
She layed quivering as I crept closer to that spot inbetween
I can still hear the moans she'd let out
A love of mine to pleasure and to love with out doubt
She'd pull me up and tell me to stop as she'd breath
She told me she loved me begged me not to leave
We'd kiss sweetly and spoon to fall asleep
She'd touch my body, I felt so weak
Once I thought that we were done with the touch
She'd enter one finger at a time until it was to much
I screamed in luxious hope she'd never draw away
I'd touch her breasts tell her to stay
The final kiss to fall asleep was the hardest to do
She left me in a heartbeat, I hadnt a clue
Author notes
This is kind of option two and option 3
I was tearing up while writting it..its a sad story in real life..I hope you enjoy it
Lexie is more than an angel
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Haha. I feel stupid. I didn't realize this was a lesbian poem, and when it said...
"Once I thought that we were done with the touch
She'd enter one finger at a time until it was to much"
I was like...what on earth...haha I thought it was from a guy's point of view. Silly me.
But anyways, yes, this poem was sweet. I know exactly how this feels, missing someone and reflecting on things like this. Great job.
Good Luck,
Erika
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very intimate and sad. People don't understand how it feels to love some one and they love you back. And still not able to share you love with them. yes, very sad and understandable.
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Great, really, i loved it. Very talented write.
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Holy Shit...
This is such a good poem... Your words just poured Passion and heartache... I love it... and this I must say you are a Very talented Love writer... don't let anyone tell you otherwise
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This poem was soo very true my love...
uhhh it was a great first memory though..haha any way
I think some of my love poems are good but not all of them
the depressign ones for me are the best in my opinion
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this is such a heartbreaking write. but very emotional, good luck
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WOW! What a read this is!! You did an amazing job on this one! One can feel the love and heat radiating from your words here! Best of luck in this contest!
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