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A Loving Memory

My friendly female companion whom I loved so much
I can still taste her lips, smell her hair, feel the touch

She sat and cried as she confessed her love
The shock she recieved when I confided the above
The kiss was so sweet that I almost drew back
I never thought I'd have her love to eventually lack

I felt her as she moved closer with a loving embrace
I remeber the heat inbetween her legs
Smiles grew as we decided it was time
I'd give evrything to hold this love that was once mine

She layed still as I licked her stomach so sweet
She layed quivering as I crept closer to that spot inbetween

I can still hear the moans she'd let out
A love of mine to pleasure and to love with out doubt

She'd pull me up and tell me to stop as she'd breath
She told me she loved me begged me not to leave

We'd kiss sweetly and spoon to fall asleep
She'd touch my body, I felt so weak
Once I thought that we were done with the touch
She'd enter one finger at a time until it was to much

I screamed in luxious hope she'd never draw away
I'd touch her breasts tell her to stay

The final kiss to fall asleep was the hardest to do
She left me in a heartbeat, I hadnt a clue

Author notes

This is kind of option two and option 3
I was tearing up while writting it..its a sad story in real life..I hope you enjoy it

Lexie is more than an angel

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  • Erika Elektrikka
    March 12, 2008

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    Haha. I feel stupid. I didn't realize this was a lesbian poem, and when it said...

    "Once I thought that we were done with the touch
    She'd enter one finger at a time until it was to much"

    I was like...what on earth...haha I thought it was from a guy's point of view. Silly me.

    But anyways, yes, this poem was sweet. I know exactly how this feels, missing someone and reflecting on things like this. Great job.

    Good Luck,
    Erika


  • Mykeee
    January 10, 2008

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    very intimate and sad. People don't understand how it feels to love some one and they love you back. And still not able to share you love with them. yes, very sad and understandable.


  • JustAnotherIdoit
    January 3, 2008
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    Great, really, i loved it. Very talented write.


  • thefuzzy1
    July 31, 2007

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    Holy Shit...

    This is such a good poem... Your words just poured Passion and heartache... I love it... and this I must say you are a Very talented Love writer... don't let anyone tell you otherwise


    • NickelleteXninja
      August 1, 2007
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      This poem was soo very true my love...

      uhhh it was a great first memory though..haha any way

      I think some of my love poems are good but not all of them

      the depressign ones for me are the best in my opinion


  • This heart of black
    July 18, 2007
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    this is such a heartbreaking write. but very emotional, good luck


  • StarEyes
    July 18, 2007

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    WOW! What a read this is!! You did an amazing job on this one! One can feel the love and heat radiating from your words here! Best of luck in this contest!

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