You died so long ago, though it seems just like yesterday that
you were still alive. Is it stupid to sit in my room and cry?
Is it silly to think that he is still alive? Maybe not in person,
but i can almost imagine him right here.
I still cry and cry and remember the time when he died. It was
in my arms he took his last breath and in my arm he never left.
you'r gone now and i just wanted you to know i still remember you and
and this topic is something i can't chew, i wish you were back again.
But all i can do is cry till' i'm with you again.
Author notes
this girls friend lost his best friend about 10 years ago when he was about six or seven...his best friend died in his arms and the anniversary of it is coming up. so here i am in his place here we go and i hope ya liked it.
A contest entry
- Loss of a Friend by MeaningfulPoet482.
450 points, ended July 19, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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yay great job! sorry i missed all of your latest poems but ill catch up
beautiful poem
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Touching
No one should ever be forgotten. This is beautiful.
"Is it silly to think that he is still alive?" No, it isn't silly at all. I know how you feel.
Patty
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This is really touching. Thank you for sharing your feelings with me and dedicating this poem. Good luck in my contest.
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fogot my applause soory
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i bet your poem really lightend this persons heart up to hear that someone cares about him and feels his pain. a great write and keep it up oh my friend said it was beautiful she really liked it as well. keep it up.
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thanks both of ya. i hope he likes it too.
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