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My Savior

He is my creator,
my everlasting light,
his glory reigns down,
showering my life,

I don't always remember to thank him,
for all that he's done,
for each and every blessing,
for giving us his only son,

hanging on the cross,
his blood pours down in sheets,
paying for the sins of many,
for you and for me,

he rose again on the third day,
so that the whole world would know,
that he is the son of God,
and of the glorious gift he has bestowed.




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  • Talking Toni gold member
    March 26, 2008

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    Your Love..............

    For our Lord and savior Jesus Christ really shines through in this amazing piece of poetry!!!The rhyme is great too!!! Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~

  • jesseramsey
    August 11, 2007

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    wonderfull

    I really liked this poem. It has a lot of feeling and passion. you are very talented, keep writing. m..


  • forget my memories
    July 31, 2007
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    Amazing!

    Wow I know you asked me to read and tell you what you can work on but wow this is amazing everything just wow i dont even know what to say you showed love for him that not many people can write so well in words good job having him in your life makes you feel like everything will always turn out okay. Amazing job!


  • heavensent0830
    July 17, 2007
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    Wow this is amazing.