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Place them on me

Getting up in the morning, then going to bed
Its like a bad dream played over and over again
I'm tensed up and wishing that I was fine
You draw closer to show me that fine can be mine

You place your hands on my back pushing down slow
Rubbing the knots lightly feels like a blow
My eyes tear over as your hands move to a different spot
Sometimes your touch can make me oh so hot

You caress my back in a sly way
To let me know your massages are here to stay

Moving in circular motions close to my spine
I cant help but to let out a moan like whine

Using your knuckles you dig in deep

To the knots that I dont want to keep

Your hands placed delicately on my shoulders move

You finish them off, it feels like a loss

 

Unsatisfied with your own pleasure brought on

You continue to massage until I'm gone

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Brilliant idea for a contest..You always enter in mine so I figured I'd enter in yours...hope you like

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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 18, 2007

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    It's always a wonderful feeling to know
    that you have someone waiting for you at
    home who will help relax and ease your mind
    from a stressful day at work. As the days
    go on, you begin to feel even more stressed
    out and pressured by the world. Nothing like
    coming home and receiving a soothingly
    wonderful massage.

    Well done and thank you very much for your
    entry in my contest. I appreciate it and
    wish you the best of luck with it here!
    Keep up the wonderful work!




    Jeremy0826