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redder bowl

 

mind transcends

such suctioned soul

as innocence laid low

 

prepared in prayer

as circumstance,

removed from strife

in smoke of life,

churned softly

 

in redder bowl

of breath bequeathed,

upon a spirit

surrendered weary

 

inhaled as spark,

of wizened sunset

 

 

 

 

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  • poet2angels gold member
    July 17, 2007

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    Beautiful!
    Such power in sunset realization! I love this!

    Such a wonderful take on the prompt!

    Lynda


  • Twins 4 me
    July 17, 2007
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    Such beautiful words! Awesome imagery. Love the feel of this! Best wishes to you!


  • kaibab silver member
    July 17, 2007

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    A lovely powerful bit of wisdom this in Nothern Friend of Haven's howl...who know in spirit much is given...beautiful entry


  • penman gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Excellent

    Very well done and a powerful poem. Best of luck in the contest.


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    your prompt is:

    "A Moment To Breathe"

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