They dazzle as diamonds
before the soul heartbeats,
where images stun
with lightning touches deep within.
Every thought,
each sense finely tuned to the point of intensity,
as the world shrinks
into inhaled second's of visionary earthquakes
for the conscious.
Author notes
Prompt - A moment to breathe
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Brunch 10/20/40 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended July 17, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ 10 Lines Or Less ~ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended July 18, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Such a wonderful, peaceful write [I nearly spelt peaceful wrong there, I'm going mad]. I love the word Panarama and the TV show
. Beautifully penned, with amazing vocabulary.
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Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
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I just wanted to add Congrats on your trophy and Good Luck in the contest xxx
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Absolutely Beautiful
This is really, really beautiful.Your words capture a moment that is almost beyond the imagination.'Visionary earthquakes for the conscious' What a marvellous line.You write fabulous poetry which is always a joy to read.Thankyou for sharing it with me,it's a privilege to read it xxx -
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Thank you so much for the great comment.
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I think this is fabulous.
Cool background perfect words. Stunning take on the prompt no wonder you won the big gold shinny Great Job.
Delila
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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A Beautful take on the prompt...I didn't stand a chance.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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WOW..................
This really took me by surprize...
Such a wonderful take on the prompt...more than I even expected....
Excellent poetry that leaves me with a sigh and in awe...
Lynda
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wonderful. deep and stirring, loved this.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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your prompt is:
"A Moment To Breathe"
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