I hear you load and clear,
Whispering your needs and desires,
Sensuously into my devouring ear,
I know I can give you what you need,
You found, you loved, you lost,
Now aimlessley you wander alone,
For a reason our paths have crossed,
And I will help you home,
Come with me my dear,
I will entangle you,
Brush away your fear,
Look after you until forever.
Author notes
adarkling
A contest entry
- Wolf Mistress search for a female Alpha.....(sorry guy's females only) by Wolf Mistress.
2625 points, ended July 31, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I Want More Family (prewrites allowed) by SoftlyScreaming.
525 points, ended July 20, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Turn those greenies into Gold (or silver or bronze) pt 4 by whispernthedark.
400 points, ended September 6, 2008, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OK I have too many thoughts..... by SuicidalLover.
400 points, ended July 23, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Nice write. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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Nice write. You have a typo in first line, should be loud. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck
♥
whisper
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Plucking at my heartstrings, this one.
I really liked it alot.
My fav. lines would have to be "Whispering you needs and desires, Sensuously into my devouring ear."
Sexy and romantic all at once. Amazing
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Beautiful and heartfelt piece of poetry my friend. It was a real joy to read. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on the HM.
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i like this poem... and im related to wolf mistress, so this will be fun... i hope you are really sincere because you sound that way.. i want 2 things from you though, 1: your AP sn in your AN and 2: for you to just drop me a line sometime.. either AP mail me or something.. i want to know you before i let you in my family, plz
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Awww
this is so nice! I liked this, and thanks for your entry -
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet of you
"I hear you loud and clear"...that one made me smile
and "Look after you forever" almost made me cry
This is such a lovely beautiful poem and touched me from the first till the last word
Thank you
XXJeannette
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