So close,
too close,
you rob me
my ever sense.
Filling my head,
filling my heart,
drowning me
with passions,
mere words
cannot contain.
Breathe in
breath out,
your scent,
your hunger,
your love.
One more breath...
I'm yours.
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Brunch 10/20/40 by poet2angels.
475 points, ended July 17, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow. this had me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what would happen. left me wantin more to find out what happend aswell. a wonderful write. well done
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thanks sweet angel
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Excellent
Very well done. A wonderfully touching poem.
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Very beautiful! I love the way you wrote this. Excellent piece!
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thank you
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to breathe in the whole of a person...beautiful write.
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I am already starting to recognize your poetry through you entering my contests. You have a unique style and that is very special...
Congrats on another beautiful piece!
Lynda
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your prompt is:
"A Moment To Breathe"
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