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Tabled Appetite


broth of lofty promises
ladeled into pefect crystal bowls
but wanting season

marinated cuts of pleasure
in colorless au jus

dressed with sides
of indistinguished
bounty

  leaves me bloated

       . . . unsatisfied

 

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Prompt: DINING ON MEDIOCRITY

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  • Star Shine
    July 17, 2007

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    This is clear, powerful, many images and sensory experiences are packed into your economical words. Well done. Congrats on the trophy


  • poetic-enigma21
    July 17, 2007
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    Very well written
    intelligent take on the prompt
    congrats on the gold
    cheers


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    wonderful take on the prompt, wonderful imagery. Hugs, Bunny


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 17, 2007
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    Your prompt! "Dining On Mediocrity"