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A Promise is a Promise

I'm trying so hard to put a smile on
and tell you I'm happy for you
but its so hard
when I really miss you
and know I loved you.

The promise I made you
when we went our seperate ways
still holds true
I'll always be there for you
and no one can push me away.

"If your happy, I'm happy."
is probably the hardest thing I've had to say.
Its true though,
thats all I want for you.
But my heart still aches for you.

I know she hates me
and I try to say it doesn't bother me.
And I know she doesn't want you to see me
if only just as a friend...
I'm scared you'll listen.

Please stay true to your word.
Please remember the times we shared.
Remember when you said you loved me.
Hold the memories close.
Remember my number, I'm always a call away.

I'll always be there.
I'm happy your happy.

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  • passionate-poet
    April 11, 2008

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    aw i hate to see when love goes bad its always heart breaking and a very difficult emotion to cope with especially when youre supposed to stand back and smile even when it hurts -hugs- thanks for sharing such an emotional poem with the rest of us


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 20, 2007

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    This is good

    Love when spoken is so true for the ones who truly hear. Love to others is just a word that is spoken in the chance they can take advantage . So sad for they will never know the true feeling of a love shared


  • live-death
    July 20, 2007
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    it is very nice...
    i liked it


  • blue20bunny
    July 20, 2007

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    sad very heartbreaking

    the passion you still have in your heart for him is strong,i know exactly how you feel . now that he is with another and he has left you to carry on. although he's made a promise to you, never to forget you. But sometimes it is too hard to keep a promise when there is another standing in the way. my heart goes out to you and i know how hard this is...keep your head up high my love and you will go far...